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Don't make me sleep
Don't let me sleep

I'm afraid of falling asleep

I wish I had nightmares to wake me up every night of what life I have

I don't want to sleep anymore

I feel myself go night after night, I feel my body and mind go numb

My heart and soul grow cold and stale

I suffer when I dream of it, but not even does suffering wake me from the dread

Not even suffering revives my frozen dead self.

It's always there. Taking what I have
Taking what I am
Leaving nothing but the empty void of existance

Existance becomes my life
My life becomes the dream
The dream becomes the spiral
The downward spiral falling into nothing
Never becoming

I am afraid to sleep
in my sleep I dream
in my dreams I see
I see it's eyes of void

I am afraid to sleep
©2006-2009 ~Werwek
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~ReadyyBreak Nov 30, 2006, 3:26:31 PM
starts off a little slow and slightly choppy but it ends REALLY good, and that makes the beginning sound better because it ties it all in.
the second or third to last stanza (depending on if you count the last sentence), is really really good. like really. xD i mean it though.
overall, great job. ^___^
i think you got the feelings across well.


annnnd your little preview image that looks like it was done in two seconds in MSPaint makes me lol a little. xP :hug: haha it's cute. XDXD ^__^
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~Rextrolopitecus Dec 1, 2006, 5:53:50 PM
ami se me dificulta mucho escribir poesia en ingles. y esta es buena
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~Werwek Dec 1, 2006, 6:49:33 PM
gracias ^^;

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I am by no means the master of the Maleficorum, for it's will bends my reality and surreality to the limits of insanity
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Mood: Joy ~Werwek Dec 1, 2006, 6:53:49 PM
weee! thanks =D

god, it's been a good while since I wrote poetry >_<
took me quite a bit to get rolling on this even <_<;;

yea, I couldn't find a good way to begin it, always have a problem with that >_<;;

thanks! yea, I like that the best as well, could be around the things salvageable from this thing -__-.

xD well....it was made in two seconds in paint to be precise xD

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I am by no means the master of the Maleficorum, for it's will bends my reality and surreality to the limits of insanity
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~ReadyyBreak Dec 1, 2006, 10:05:51 PM
aw, true. you should write poetry more often; i love it!


hahahaha... good work. XDXD :smooch:
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~AzkaChanYaoiganElite Dec 18, 2006, 10:41:50 PM
waaaaa O-O kawaii, me gusta. Es muy padre lo que dice... El miedo a dormir esa cosa misteriosa que parece acosarle, le da un toque tenebroso y oscuro a la poesia, pero eso mismo, le da su escencia y lo que hace que a uno le agrade. Felicitaciones, esta muy buena ^ ^

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"Por darme DOLOR y lo PEOR de ti... GRACIAS!! Por que por eso soy lo que hoy muestro y puedo encararme con valor a la adversidad"I'm going to eat the superdelicious Tenochtitlan --> [link]
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~Werwek Dec 20, 2006, 9:38:45 AM
JOAR! gracias =D

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I am by no means the master of the Maleficorum, for it's will bends my reality and surreality to the limits of insanity
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